In response to Awesome Lauren, who is amazing
she is prone to falling fast and hard
in the blink of an eye
and she breaks just as easily
told me she has a heart of glass
always trying to put the pieces back together again
but she’s wrong
her heart is made from diamond
the common misconception is diamonds are the hardest substance
but only in resistance to scratches
but the crystalline structure is subject to shattering
she sells herself too short
her heart is beautiful
priceless
and the fact that she can give it away without a second thought
only reinforces that
woe to the fool who doesn’t accept such a precious gift
let’s it fall into a million sparkling gems
he has no concept of value
only seeks a new pretty bauble
he deserves the glass hearts so common
not her’s
forged in the depths of her suffering
the crucible of time that has shaped her
she told me she has a heart of glass
because she refuses to see the immense wealth she holds
it’s why i’m afraid to touch it
my filthy hands don’t deserve to even come near something so pristine
her diamond heart
the stuff dreams are made of
This is an amazing response to her wonderful verse.
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Thank you. It came from a place of understanding.
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Yes, I could make that out. You are welcome.
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Reblogged this on thoughts, musings, and stuff and commented:
Mike’s response to my poem Glass Heart, published this morning.
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You’re too sweet, MM. I love it!
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