whisper to me your sweetest lies, make me feel as if it is real, your hot breath sending chills down my spine as you say all the things i wish were true
then fade away like the morning dew, no sign you ever existed, just fade away, a phantom hibiscus, to pollenate another dream, germinate the seed of wonder
tell me lies with silvery tongue, one fraught with trails of promise, that i am enough, there is a chance, of lazy days filled with abandon
permeate my hollow form, infuse me with your grandeur, then fade away, vanish before my gaze, before my lips can brand you with burning wanting desire
I love love love this. And I was going to mention the silvery tongue line too. lol
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here i thought it was a bad line. i really don’t know anything about poetry. Lol.
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Apparently not! LMAO
Mike. You make me happy.
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fuck it, i’ll just keep going with my gut.
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That sounds best.
But I totally understand. EVERY single time I post something that I feel is a B- at best, is the one that people say “this is one of the best things you’ve written”. Point in case, Clockmaker (if you’ve read it). I really did NOT like how it turned out but I wanted it out of my brain. I don’t understand writing either.
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That one was brilliant. I told you so.
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Right!! See what I mean!!!
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I do. The ones I’m proud of get ignored.
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Me too, Mike. Me too.
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“tell me lies with silvery tongue” this is so sublime to read!
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again your words bring a smile. thank you.
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