she smiles
as the blade traces
up my shin
the barest pressure
a thin line of
crimson beading
into a slow drip
into my thigh
she carves our intials
ever possessive
in insecure stalkings
but i smile wide
a demon possessed
in lustful repose
as the cartoon hearts
cut deeply to bone
i cannot control
my laughter as her
nails carve xylophonic
furrows down my
now bare ivory ribs
and i feel myself
stiffen as her teeth
bite fiercely upon
my fluttering heart
she straddles me
grinding with a painful
intent that does
nothing to slow the
convulsions
as the sharp blade
comes down
againagainagain
and i explode
inside her wet slit
hot blood runs down
her heaving breasts
i gave her my
everything and she
gave me the only
thing she knew
and somewhere in
this hellstorm
of razored declarations
a symphony of desire
crashed down upon
an unsuspecting world
she staggered away
slightly worse for wear
i became a feast for
love’s bloated maggots
I’ve never met a woman who wanted to be abused sexually unless she was mentally ill. Your poems have taken a distinctly misogynist tone. Goodbye Manic Mike. This is where we part ways. Best of luck to you. I hope you find some joy and peace and wellbeing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
in this poem, she holds the blade. how is that misogynistic?
LikeLike
Violent sex is misogyny. Women can also be chauvinist and misogynistic. Look at Margery Taylor Greene and Lauren Bobart. It’s still patriarchal bullshit. Now, I have been kind to you and very kind in explaining what YOU need to know on a basic human level. Goodbye.
LikeLiked by 1 person
good luck to you
LikeLike
I don’t need luck Mike. I’m good at what I do, you dumbfuck.
LikeLike
wow. one poem and you turned mean. i was trying to have a dialogue and understand not be attacked for my question.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Man, this place is still filled with goofballs. I don’t know why I thought things might have changed.
LikeLike
i honestly don’t know anymore. a consensual poem of two willing participants had to be mansplained to the writer that he was wrong.
LikeLiked by 1 person
People have become so soft, it’s pathetic.
LikeLike
i just keep writing. there is nothing else but lessening returns.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I especially like how they had to name drop some scum bag politicians just to puff themselves up and inflate their self-righteousness. I’ve found that is typically where people go when they nothing to really say or no way to defend their position. Weak.
LikeLike