i want to lose myself in your eyes
let all the broken fall away and find the solace of your perfection
it would be so easy to do
most of the day is spent dreaming it, the rest wishing it were here and now
what would you do if i told you that i love you, casually whispered the words to you from out of nowhere
words that have stamped themselves onto my tongue
but refuse to fall
unlike me
somehow i tumbled into the orbit of the most glorious star in the universe
am i holding my breath
or is space itself collapsing my lungs
i don’t know
but i could lose myself in your eyes
and feel whole for all the parts that evaporated
Breathtaking in its honesty and openness. 100% most definitely.
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then why won’t it stop whispering. open like a fresh wound.
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Because you have more to say.
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Nicely stripped down to plain!
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honesty is the best policy
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I was gonna say my favorite line and then realized it was the entire thing 💕
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it’s rare i try for a typical love type poem without all the extraneous stuff. feels naked.
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Feels perfect to me.
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maybe i am figuring out simplicity finally.
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Or maybe I just like your poetry and stories…. (currently reading notches btw)
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that’s awesome!
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