it was a triumph of tragedy
a new glistening peak in the mountains of suffering that have sprung out of the craggy exposed bits of his spine
those shards of calcification and ignoble regret
filled with fluid and the cabling necessary to control the puppet
bone spurs jutting
carving new issues
lamenting
laminating
broken by the weight of another defeat
denial
desensitized to the entire thing
her eyes were like factory made gems, faceted, beautiful, ultimately vapid and vacant, polished glass, ice that chills to the core
the unsteady seeming movements of a drunken master
or preying mantis
deadly and incomprehensible
zombies and zeppelins, the fourth reich of science fiction narrative
golden apple of dischordia, silver apple of iduin, forbidden fruit of eden
a catastrophe fruit salad
her voice like barb wire constricting around a heart, slivers of glass like daggers flowing through arteries, maiming and destroying
or honey sweet
both
same time
it was a tragedy of triumph
victory gnashed in the jaws of defeat
the machine churns on
ever on
steadily mulching all the decay into a bed for new life
irregardless of intent
light through a schismatic crystal
a rainbow of pain
the slow separation of individual flavors of sorrow
only visible in infrared
ultraviolet clouds of magnesium
exposed to pure oxygen
igniton
precision
at the core
an entire village
gone
burned out huts and krakatoa carved into the trunk of a tree
a mystery
she sang to me, off key but sounding like an angel to my half deafened ears, too many concerts, too many loud jobs, too much if everything, but her song was beauty in the key of her
and damn it
that was enough salvation for me
I like this. Especially well done with the italicized parts in there.
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It was actually three failed poems that fit together
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Wow. Your failures make my best ones look like absolute shit.
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Agree to diaagree
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ggrrrr
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