(un)titled ode XVI

i have
whispered
your name
so many
times
my tongue
has
formed
a callus

my heart
has
quickened
at the
simple
thought of you
it is
as if
my brain
torments it
callously

one
grows numb
the
other
goes insane
as if i have a choice

8 thoughts on “(un)titled ode XVI”

Cassa Bassa says:

06/02/2019 at 5:08 am

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erroneouschoices says:

11/21/2018 at 6:37 pm

Love the calloused tongue part

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1. mike ennenbach says:
  
  11/21/2018 at 6:40 pm
  
  yeah. it just popped into my head and felt like it showed true dedication
  
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  1. erroneouschoices says:
    
    11/21/2018 at 6:43 pm
    
    It’s a fabulous metaphor for that
    
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    1. mike ennenbach says:
      
      11/21/2018 at 6:53 pm
      
      it’s all i have. metaphors.
      
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      1. erroneouschoices says:
        
        11/21/2018 at 7:07 pm
        
        Well and a great singing voice
        
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        mike ennenbach says:
        
        11/21/2018 at 7:14 pm
        
        Hahaha. There is always that.
        
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        erroneouschoices says:
        
        11/21/2018 at 7:38 pm
        
        🤪
        
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