curious curious, the lights in the sky, blinking a message across the vast eons
worrisome worrisome, specks of colorful dye, polluting all of the waters abysmal
deep in the shadows, beyond mortal recollection, lurking in the lost moments of time
softly padding footsteps, across a desert of glass, what tremulous terrors at dusk hide
serious serious, this horde insubstantial, ready to ride gloriously into battle
still curious curious, are the lights in the sky, bringing messages across the vast eons
Mike's Manic Word Depot 
I agree with Tara here. The words are glittering with a literary substance.
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thank you. this comment is wonderful. not sure i’ve ever written anything that glittered before.
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I wish one of my works could ever reflect the sparkle that hunts the attention in this one! I’ll never know!
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the Lou Reed one is pretty great.
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I like Mistress Heroin more. What about that one?
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I never saw that one
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Whoa!!!! Mike!! This is AWESOME! I *love* this. This is a definite one for the collection.
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well. huh. okay. thank you.
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