she felt like a satin draped coffin as i slid into her
the thought made me pause
a mixed metaphor that struck a chord in my mind
in this act of love making i felt myself dying in pieces
as i gave all of myself to her i was inexplicably changed
the man that began this was no longer there
this was a new version of the old me finding peace in the warmth of her desire
i stayed quiet as these thoughts pummeled by brain
falling into the rhythm of her breathing
of her moans
swept away upon the tidal majesty of her laying beneath me
her grip ensured i wouldn’t slip
her eyes made it clear i would never want another
she felt like paradise as i slowly slid into her
i lost who i was as we became
one
Wow great piece!
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it felt real
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