a lone flower in the heavy summer air
it’s head droops low towards the ground
too much for the stem to maintain
a lone ship deep beneath the surface of the raging sea
it’s bow broken and settled into the silt
too much water for the holds to maintain
a lone man at the edge of a rocky cliff overlooking the end
his head bent under the duress of many tragic flaws
too many demons for one mind to maintain
along comes a girl with a watering can
gently tending the thirsty roots and give strength to the wilted plant
enough love to give hope
along comes a diver with an oxygen tank
gently exploring the forlorn vessel so far down in the inky black waters
enough curiousity to shine light
along comes a woman to the edge of the cliff
taking the hand of the sad man at his wits end and contemplating his forever
enough empathy to raise doubt
the flower, the ship and the forsaken
the girl, the diver and the woman
each not knowing what the other has endured
but giving strength with the smallest of deeds
i’ve been the flower and she was the girl
i’ve been the shipwreck and she was diver
i’ve been the forsaken and she was the woman
but who am i now
and this time will she come
all i know is the pain is excruciating
the walls are bleeding
and i’ve forgotten what is real
beautiful analogies!
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thank you.
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I have just read this to my 9 year old =)
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oh wow. that is really special to me.
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it is age appropriate this piece =)
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not many of those here
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I love how you wove this. So so good Mike.
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thank you. for once i didn’t overthink it.
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This one is tamer than usual but more powerful, I think.
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thank you. tamer, huh? i guess less intense for me for sure.
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You must be having a good day
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it was a long one but had a few bright spots. enough to survive until tomorrow. phasers set to tired though.
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😊🖖🏾
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