blades of sound slice through his heaving chest, an echo of the poetry that flays and filets, consternation and chills running down his spine, across his face, raw emotion and buried truth
her words filled his mind
lit a fire inside of him
and as he lay on the cusp of giving up
her words rang out and called him
home
the flames ran up and down his arms, he stood stone still, as shades of blue and white licked and his skin bubbled and popped, it didn’t register, meant nothing to him in the slightest
he read and reread every line
wishing it was about him
knowing they were not
that home was just another dream untrue
a familiar lie
his foot pressed down hard on the accelerator, his hands tied the blindfold sloppily, difficult with his hands cuffed to the wheel, his lips sewn shut with barbed wire, tiny beads of blood down his chin
Holy shit Mike. This is, wow. Really good. That last bit just, man, it just makes a great poem absolutely amazing. So good! I hate how good it is. And I love it. gggrrr
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Thank you Ms Caribou. I went short and, well not sweet. Short and visceral I guess.
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You’re welcome Mr Ennenbach
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*polishes monocle, tips top hat
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